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Tuesday 16 August 2016

my Olympic`s writing poem for swimming


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  1. Hi Cody i like your Olympic poem and also new noise at the start you should be a bit clearer and the camera should stay still hope we can be friends

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    1. Sorry i was supposed to write\

      Hi Cody i like your Olympic poem and also the noise at the start you should be a bit clearer and the camera should stay still hope we can be friends

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  2. Kia ora My Name is Nate I like the way you talked about the Olympics and the Noise Made the video more better and I think you should next have a clearer camera Good work keep it up

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    1. Kia ora My Name is Nate I like the way you talked about the Olympics and the Noise Made the video more better and I think you should next have a clearer camera Good work keep it up here is my blog to comment on it if you wont

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  3. Hi Cody, I really liked your poem about the Olympics and the noise made me crack up. Maybe next time you could keep the camera still and talk a little bit slower. Overall I liked your poem and really enjoyed the poem.

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